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Hauteslides

Any complex visual will not translate into slides. A lot of Tufte's work would need to be reworked if someone wanted to present it in slide format.

Presenting statistics on slides requires simplistic information design.

I work in the litigation consulting sector of presentation design and we recreate these types of visuals often so that the jury can understand what the point or the message of the statistic is.

Sometimes when using a slide alone as the visual it's easy to lose what's most important by preserving all the detail.

The map is effective because it's relatable (although only for those who actually have visited this area). I would get rid of all the side street names, and mark the pump with an icon in one color, and then the deaths in another color (red would work great). Just adding color would instantly make those areas pop out. Only way to use black for deaths would be to use another faded color for the map itself. Even a 50% gray map would automatically de-clutter this visual.

Another alternative would be to use spheres where the shape area is determined by the number of deaths.

When creating a data based visual we always ask, What's the main point we're trying to show here.
It's not the number of individual deaths at each residence, but rather the clusters around the pump, that's what the story is. Then decide what's the best way to show this information.

-Magda Maslowska

Adam Lawrence

Hello Magda,

you make some great points, but I think you are missing the emotional aspect. The black bars immediately call up somber images of rows of coffins at each house. The effect is quite chilling.

I don't think this could be achieved with any other shape, or with brighter colours.

All the best,

Adam
Work•Play•Experience

Hauteslides

@Adam, as I mentioned, in order to use black to signify deaths, the streets need to fade back, either by using a diff. color or opacity value.

Also, if you view the original map, which was used in the presentation, the individual bars disappear. That's the point of this post, using a visual that didn't translate to slide format. That level of detail (which yes is chilling) doesn't show up in large scale hence losing the intended effect.

If you wanted to preserve the detail of showing individual "coffins" an entirely new infographic should be created in my opinion. Losing the map entirely. Perhaps putting the pump in the center, and gradually building the black bars around it. Showing highest density closest to the pump.

Justin O'Brien

I like your thinking Magda. I would also start from scratch with a new graphic , that reinforces the main message of the presentation, and use logic and rhetoric(emotion)to impact and influence the audience.

I would then take the new slide and the old slide and hand them out. No projection.

Alex H.

@magda:
> Losing the map entirely.

but that's losing the main argument of the whole diagrammatic deduction. it's the street map that's important; especially as there is no 1:1 relationship between "living closer to the pump" and "ordering more coffins from the carpenter". the real question that this map urges to ask is why some houses, even if they are close to the pump, have NO coffins in this infographics (if i remember right, the reason was that they have either their own pump in the backyard or used for some reason some pump that was farther away). the beauty of this map (even if i totally agree with your remarks above that the readability of the map is improvable) is this reasoning of "second degree" beyond the rather obvious relation (that your "new" infographics would have focused).

Fred E. Miller

Nice post and story.

The number of black dots lessening the further from the pump is a great graphic representation of what happened and solved the mystery.

Thanks!

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